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Tuesday 10 June 2014

My Mum and Aunty

My Mum always be angry when we wake her up and when we are not listening to her. She always be happy when we do something and after when we do something for her and she lets us to have free time inside.


My Aunty always takes us out to the park and to get some lunch and shes a kind Aunty. She cooks dinner for us.
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4 comments:

  1. Trinity18 June 2014 at 10:36

    I have to change 4 things

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    1. April18 June 2014 at 10:44

      Dear Trinity,
      You had to write the four things on the board not just I have to change four things NEXT TIME TRINITY.
      From April Edwards

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  2. Trinity18 June 2014 at 10:56

    These are things I need to learn to get better at writing
    1. making sense
    2. fullstops and capital letters

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  3. Raewen-Eve1 July 2014 at 10:21

    hi Trinity its me Raewen and I like your story from Raewen

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