Writing A Narrative

	T	Rainbows End
	O	The schools went to Rainbows End for a trip.
	P	Roller coaster - When I went on the Roller coaster and it goes down and I started screaming it goes up slow and then it goes down fast. After the Roller coaster I start to feel like I’m going to spew in the Toilet.
	S	When you're finished you have to go to your class line and have a snack after the things that you did and sit down and I relax my body.

Some schools go to Rainbows End for a trip and some of them go on the Roller coaster because they think it looks fun but to me it looks scary. When I went upside down it was fun and that's my favourite part on the Roller coaster. Then I went to the Invader and it was scary. Then I went to the Scorpion Karts and it was fun. Then I went on the fear fall and I went up slowly and I looked down I started to get scared then it stop for 3 seconds then it went down fast and I couldn’t breath then it stopped when it got to the bottom and me and Raewen got off and I helped Matiu take his belt off. Then we went to the Pirate ship and it went up and down and it got higher and it was fun and the last one is the Mansion Master and it was fun and scary. Then we came and sit down and relax my body and I had a snack. I started to feel like that there’s butterflies in my tummy and at home I spewed in the Toilet.